Wednesday 4 November 2009

Section 6 : Character Outlines and Script

Jenny
A 16 year old girl who finds herself being blackmailed by John Doe and Joe Bloggs. She is visibly troubled and is mentally unstable although when threatened she becomes extraordinarily strong and defends herself very well

Robert
Jenny’s father. He is tired of his daughter and her paranoia and drives her away from home. He has looked after Jenny since her mother died when she was very young and has become a raging alcoholic. Jenny having grown up with this behaviour is under the influence that this is normal and believes that her father loves her dearly.

Sandra
The receptionist of the hotel. She is a typical pretty, blonde, nosey thirty something bimbo who has along with Sergei been at the hotel for 15 years. She soon acts as a mother figure to Jenny, taking a great deal of interest in her and eventually becoming her only confidant. However this is short lived as she soon begins selling Jenny's information to thugs and is in close contact with her father.

Sergei
The hotel's Russian housekeeper. He seems to know everything about everyone that comes to the hotel, particularly Jenny. He tries to keep her out of harms way, but sadly his tries are in vain. He is close to retirement age, with deep set wrinkles and white hair.

Joe Bloggs
A young man not much older that 25 who tries to conceal his identity and his unknown battle scars from the audience by wearing a thick balaclava. Bloggs view of life is that his only concern is when he will get to next be in a bar brawl, he is the brawn to Doe's brains as his burly frame shows the audience.

John Doe
The complete opposite physically to Bloggs, Doe is short, skinny and in his mid-60's. Like Bloggs he never shows his face on screen to continue with the films sense of anonymity, his obsesion with Jenny and desperate need to know more about her is starting to affect his mental health and he is becoming careless.
SCRIPT
FADE IN:
EXT. OUTSIDE HOTEL – DAY
Establishing shot outside of the hotel.
CUT TO:
INT.
OUTSIDE HOTEL ROOM – DAY
Character #1 scrambles for keys.
CUT TO:
INT.
HOTEL ROOM – DAY
Inside the hotel room.
Character searches room.
Character sits on chair and curls up in a ball.
Character gets up and we get shots of pictures which are lining the wall.
Character takes one picture off the wall and falls against it. CAPTION SHOWS 2 WEEKS LATER
CUT TO:
INT.
HOTEL ROOM – DAY, 2 WEEKS LATER
Character is on a chair which she was sat on two weeks previously, but wearing different clothes and sat in a different position to symbolise the time lapse.
The character is fidgeting and then the phone which is in the character’s hands begins to ring.
She answers the phone and stands up to walk
JENNY (while on the phone) Hello?
CUT TO: INT.
BATHROOM – DAY
Within the en suite bathroom of the hotel room.
Character is still on the phone
JENNY (while on the phone) I know, dad.
JENNY (while on the phone) I’ve got to go. I love you.
Jenny puts the phone down and falls against the bathroom door, crying.
CUT TO:
INT.
HOTEL ROOM – DAY
Shadow on the bathroom door.
CUT TO:
INT.
BATHROOM – DAY
*BANG FROM OUTSIDE THE DOOR*
Jenny gasps and runs outside of the bathroom
CUT TO:
INT.
HOTEL ROOM – DAY
Jenny runs into the bedroom and pauses by the bed.
We are then able to see a bed covered in pills and pictures.
She picks up a piece of paper from the bed and drops a picture off it.
Jenny then drops the letter and runs towards the window.
CUT TO:
EXT.
HOTEL ROOM – DAY
Outside Jenny’s bedroom window, Jenny searches out of the window and looks in every direction.
She then looks straight into the camera.
Captions are laid over the film;
CAPTION: Produced by Vick Copley
CAPTION: Edited by Demi Mottram
CAPTION: Written by Rebecca Marshall
FADE TO BLACK
CAPTION: Directed by Leanne Smith
BLACK AND RED CAPTION STATING ‘SUITE 16’
FADE OUT

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